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Flutter_me_max50

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Take the word left behind FOR YOU and create that HAIKU we all know and love...remember to [hit]enter after each line and to leave a word behind...
1st line: 5 syllables

2nd line: 7 syllables

3rd line: 5 syllables

Flutter_me_max50

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I'll start...I s'pose...duh-right?
sunshine

sunshine falls sweetly

loving the warmth of the rays

afternoon delight

NW: blanket

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The vigor of spring

takes a rest snuggled under

a blanket of snow

(moonshine)

Flutter_me_max50

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moonshine casts lightly

soft silver shadows fallen

takes night into day

(number)

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(We CAN make this fun, naughty, creative, TWISTED, etc...c'mon---give it a try! I see you lurkers...LOL).

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number one is sweet

number four is sweeter yet

number nine just sucks

(umbrella) . . . . hope I got that right!?


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~ Woodrow Wilson

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Naughty is not acceptable in the "public" forum. So watch out. That's why my thread was deleted. If you want it to go that way it will have to be in a "Private" group. Valerie made that clear to me in that thread. FYI


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Open it up now

Pop Open Your Umbrella

Shine away the rain...:)

(POT)


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I_am_joker_2_max50

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Sorry, my browser apparently doesn't accept the Enter/Return key on this site. Been having problems with that.


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Ah HA! I have to press enter twice for it to work. Man. Now I have to back and fix all of my images.


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get my umbrella

please get my old umbrella

that's my umbrella

nw: forgiven

A_festergreen_max50

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all is forgiven

lest we forget our best sins

for sins are our friends

(contretemps)


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contretemps they come

and contretemps they must go

inopportune word

( autumn )


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a forgotten night

autumn chilled the city air

i recall your kiss

(glimmer)


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temperance be damned

imbibing chilled libations

drift away the day

this one is from iggyziggy3

(opaline)


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Blondie bellowed [this]

"'Rapture'" flowed from her red lips

Early Rap or Pop?

(turquoise)

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I'm so jealous of

your covetousness desire

such a deadly sin

(seasonal)


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before morning came

wet dew shining like diamonds

my thoughts turn to you

(dreams)


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sorry - i wanted to write one and couldn't get my head around anything seasonal except allergy commercials. :(


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Life brings only lies

Dreams are where the truth resides

Sail the stars with me.

(alien/alienation)


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I'VE GOT an idea - how about instead of leaving a sometimes "difficult" word as your starting off point - you should be able to take a verb or adjective from the previous haiku. that way there would be more of a flow...give me permission to do so lovely artbistro peoples....
and by the way phoenixfirestorm - i like your haiku - just not your word...
WORD


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I_am_joker_2_max50

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sorry. I like your idea though.


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I write poetry

but never tried a haiku

It's nice for a change.

(until we have all agreed to abuxbaum-DANCE)


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deep into the night

my dark vanilla jungle

heart and mind dancing

(rain)


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soft rain on the roof

conjures dreams of tomorrow

dreams of soft cool rain

(love)


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abuxbaum said:

a forgotten night

autumn chilled the city air

i recall your kiss

(glimmer)

nice one!


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Regnadkcin said:

abuxbaum said:

a forgotten night

autumn chilled the city air

i recall your kiss

(glimmer)

nice one!

thanks!


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raining down on me

i'm listening to the love

thunder in my heart

(sadness)


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A call to sadness

to rain down upon my head

Lost sight of caring

(dew)


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Do be do be dew

for if the grass was wetter

my neighbor would slip.

(crab)


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